ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!
manyface
1 year ago
i like this a lot!!! it's very powerful and visceral and i enjoy that about poetry in general, so well done :D - j
this was such a beautiful piece, ty for sharing :] i loooove the anaphora
this was very beautiful!! thank you for sharing and we hope it all feels a little lighter sometimes,
this is such a raw and honest poem, and a very well-crafted one at that. It's almost like I can feel the weight of their absence myself, great job and hope you're doing well!