chapter 1 is currently being revised, will revise other chapters to add more cohesion + resolve some loose ends + make things flow more logically

also by revising I mean changing the plot quite a lot

original will stay up until the full revision is complete

or maybe I'll get rid of it (from the site, I still have a copy of the original on my drive) and put the new ch. 1 in idk

please archive the original dont get rid of it pleaseee