hii! just wanted to say i read the 4 chapters of red handed! i love intrigue stories like this! at first its still a bit confusing though, like how the 10 years ago assassination of the emperor ties to current events, would andefi and the ndoa still be relevant? and the countries (counted 3 so far, valles, lentia, dezilin) and their relationships with each other… perhaps could benefit from more explanation, though im
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not sure how to do that without resorting to infodumping haha writing is hard. if you can infodump to me right here or point to where i can read more about your world id love to!