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wonderful ! i'll add you later today :]

there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!

i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j

thank you both so much !! it means a lot that you enjoyed them :]

This is really moving, I love how it starts and ends with the same line

@percevalprintpress thank you!!! though, the lines are slightly different! - j and therry

your use of enjambment is inspired, you have a way of moving readers from one line to the next that works so well. incredible poem!

@ryomakesthings thank you so much!! that means a lot :> - j and therry

holy crappp this is so well written

@symphonic thank you!!! therry wanted to write about our first transition between system hosts, we hope it resonates :0 - j

this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!

@ryomakesthings Thank you!!

this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it

Really like this one!

this is really great, i feel for you. thank you for sharing your words and experiences!

this is such a beautiful thought - we don't talk enough about how non-linear life can be at times. congratulations on your first piece!

this is remarkable. your writing is remarkable.

this is such a strong and vulnerable piece of writing - thank you so much for sharing it with us, this is beyond beautiful!

I think you encapsulated perfectly the idea of adulthood as compromise, there is something so beautiful about how you used such a small moment in daily life to communicate a strong concept!