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I fixed small but important layout things on Episode 1 (I released this episode in such a rushed manner that these details were overlooked at release time)
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This Is (NOT!) A Car Club was updated.
4 days ago
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This Is (NOT!) A Car Club was updated.
6 days ago
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I'm planning to release Episode 1 of the next game (This Is (NOT!) A Car Club 2??) at the start of July. Let's see how well that deadline ages.
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I'm playing through the game right now to find small errors to fix, because I want the game to be better, AND when I change the files, my site appears in the "Activity" tab so people may discover the game. And while I play I also gain insights about what I did bad and what I did good, which I'll have in mind when I make the follow-up to this game.
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juntogawa
1 week ago
-It's good to write in simple words, but don't exaggerate it. It's also important to write naturally!
juntogawa
1 week ago
-Too much stuff thrown at the player can feel messy, but can also feel fun. Find a combination where it's not too messy and not too boring/empty/structured
juntogawa
1 week ago
-Don't try to explain the context and background of the story with a long dialogue in the start. The player has to know what world it's being thrown into, but they should be able to understand that naturally from the environment
juntogawa
1 week ago
-The personality of the characters shouldn't be shown with grammar and word choices only. It should be deeper than that. It should be shown with their behavior primarily.
juntogawa
1 week ago
Seems like the main point it: Make it natural, don't force it. Most importantly, just make it fun
juntogawa
1 week ago
And I don't mean, just do whatever feels right in the moment. That's not what I mean with natural. I mean, use the knowledge I get about storytelling and design to make natural decisions that don't feel like I'm following a manual for creating things
juntogawa
1 week ago
-Have confidence in that the story and ideas are good as themselves, no need for irony or meta-jokes to comment on stuff
Made some small fixes on the "VHS filter" I've put on top of the game. I only make very very very small updates once every few months, because otherwise I risk breaking the game. The game is actually done, and is very bugfree for being a web game of this kind. But there are still some things I want to fix post-release. Mostly spelling errors right now.
Fixed some spelling & word errors